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Student Writing Guidelines |
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for independent study and seminar
papers prepared under my supervision |
These guidelines are
applicable
to papers submitted during the 2007-08 academic year.
Introduction and
Summary
A long piece of legal writing is an
exercise in persuasion. The author must develop an argument and persuade
the reader that the author's point of view is correct. The author should
identify a problem to be solved.
The author should state what problem is. The author
should explain how the author proposes to solve the problem. The author
should defend that solution.
In the best of all
worlds, the paper is based on a thesis, which is the point that the
author wants to make, and the author can state that thesis in one or two
sentences. One sentence does not a paper make, of course. The
author should use the length of the paper to explain where the thesis
comes from (why this thesis) and where the thesis goes (why
this thesis, again). The paper should explain the background of the problem,
demonstrate why the problem is worth solving, describe how others have
addressed the problem (if it has been addressed before), and explain in
some detail both how the author proposes to solve the problem and why
the author’s solution is superior to any other suggested to date.
Why write a
paper?
Advocacy and persuasion mean different things in different contexts. An
independent study or seminar paper is a work of scholarship, not a brief.
The major goal of the paper is to demonstrate the author's ability to master a body of material (both
primary and secondary sources), to understand the doctrinal and
policy aspects of that material, and to apply it in analyzing some unresolved or unaddressed problem of law and/or policy.
The paper is a sizable step beyond the legal research memo and
the moot court brief that students prepare during their first
year. Those projects call for mastery of some legal issue and
advocacy for a particular client. The research paper requires
mastery of the material, an awareness of its nuances and implications, and extension
of the material in addressing some problem
that exists apart from a particular individual or firm or (even)
government.
What should the paper
include?
Often, a good
thesis can be stated--and should be stated--in a single sentence. It
is a good idea to include that statement in the introduction to your
paper, and to repeat it from time to time (varying its details depending
on context) throughout the paper. Beware of elaborate introductions
and conclusions. Don't waste space at the beginning of the paper
giving an overly-detailed explanation of the problem and its background. Expect
that 25% to 30% of the finished product will be explanation and summary
of the issues and existing resources that bear on those issues.
Expect that 70% to 75% of the finished product will be the author's own
analysis and proposed resolution, both supported by appropriate
research. The paper must anticipate, consider, and respond to serious
criticisms of its approach.
Pause here to absorb the
importance of having a clearly worked out thesis. Clarity can be extraordinarily difficult. Identifying your
thesis, and understanding how to communicate that thesis briefly, is often
the hardest part of the writing process.
I do not advise or accept papers that are in
the form, "This paper considers the issues surrounding X."
Style and logic count.
Form and format count. Spellcheck and proofread each and every draft
of the paper that you turn in. Never, ever turn in any piece of
written work--even an early outline of the paper--that is anything less
than your absolutely best effort. I will grade your work
accordingly.
What is a
good topic?
You may write about a narrow point of law, an interpretive technique, or a broad
question of public policy. The thesis may be that a Court of
Appeals has wrongly applied a slice of the Copyright Act or that patent
law is headed for hell in a handbasket. The success of a paper doesn’t
depend on the breadth of the issue that it addresses, although more narrowly
focused papers are typically more successful. Its success
depends on how persuasively the author explains and defends a point of
view.
Selecting a topic for a paper can be a daunting
task. You can derive ideas for papers
by reading news reports regarding pending legislation or key recent
cases. Listen carefully during class (and read carefully in
preparation for class) for references to unresolved issues in the
law. Papers need not identify or solve all of the problems in a
given area of the law. A perfectly good paper (again, often the
very best papers) may pick up on a relatively small aspect of a larger
concern and explain the importance of that aspect. A good paper
may cover ground already addressed by another author, if the new author
believes that prior work took an incorrect approach to the problem or
overlooked some important issue. Looking at an old problem in a
new light may be the basis for a good paper. Case notes--papers
that simply analyze single opinions--are discouraged, unless the
court's opinion is used to frame some broader issue in law or public
policy. And I generally agree with
Professor Eric Goldman's observations on paper topics.
Students interested in
writing an Independent Study papers under my supervision are expected to
make substantial progress toward identifying a topic before
approaching me about supervising the work.
How much
research is necessary?
This will depend, as it must, on the
topic. At the least, the author should demonstrate a
command of all relevant primary (case, statute, regulation, treaty)
sources as well as significant secondary sources (books, law review
articles, appropriate newspaper and journal material, and--where
relevant, and even then usually only in small doses--material from the
Internet). One, sometimes unstated, implication of the author's
need to develop a thesis is that some significant amount of research
must be completed before a thesis can be formulated. This is partly to assure
that the thesis has not previously been argued, and partly to assure
that thesis, even if novel, is appropriately tailored to the scope of a
research paper. Since a major goal of writing a paper is mastery
of the techniques of argument and scholarship, I cannot emphasize
enough that authors should familiarize themselves with the perils of
relying on secondary (and sometimes even primary) sources that are only
available on the World Wide Web.
Who is the
relevant audience for the paper?
Papers should be written for
an audience that is informed generally about intellectual property law
but is not an expert on the question being addressed. Imagine a
well-written paper being submitted for publication in an intellectual
property law journal. (The note below on sources and citation addresses
a related question.)
More
advice
Professor David Post of Temple Law School has a page
of thoughtful advice on writing legal scholarship. Professor
Post's advice is extremely helpful and in many respects expands in
more detail on themes touched on above. Professor Post's page is
here. Professor Michael Froomkin of the University of
Miami School of Law also has a
good and
useful page of advice.
Form, Format,
and Deadlines
What about
length and format?
Independent study papers written under my
supervision must be a minimum of thirty (30) and a maximum of fifty
(50) pages long, including footnotes. Seminar papers must be not
less than twenty (20) and not more than forty (40) pages long,
including footnotes. Margins should be not greater than 1" on all
sides; font size for text and footnotes should be not greater than
12-point type using Times New Roman font, or its equivalent,
proportionally spaced. Text should be double-spaced. Footnotes
should be single-spaced. All citations should be in the author's best
effort to comply with Blue Book form.
As I noted above, as a general rule,
not more than 1/3 of the overall length of the paper should be devoted
to describing the background and contours of the problem or issue that
the paper addresses. Roughly 2/3 of the overall length of the
paper should be devoted to your analysis of that problem.
Outlines,
drafts, and the like
I require that students turn in to me what
amount to four (4) versions of their papers. In reverse order, these
are (4) a final version; (3) a full-dress draft (a version of the paper
that is substantially complete, including all footnotes); (2) a
thorough outline; and (1) a short summary, together with a literature
search. Requirements for each version follow.
The short
summary
This is due two weeks after the start of the
semester. I may require that the short summary be redone, if it does
not demonstrate sufficient research and thought to that point. This
is a three- to four-page narrative summary of the paper topic, the
author’s anticipated research, and the author’s anticipated argument.
Neither footnotes nor sources are required at this stage. The
purpose of this summary is to ensure that the author is following a
well thought-out strategy. A subsidiary purpose is to examine the
author's skill at assembling and writing a three- to four-page
paper. Writing counts, in addition to substance, at all stages of
the project. Along with the short summary, the author must turn
in the results of a literature search on the topic. This should
consist of the results of a search on Westlaw or Lexis/Nexis, and/or by
hand, for legal scholarship that bears on the proposed topic.
Simply printing out the result of a computerized search is not
acceptable. The author must have reviewed the sources and
identified those (a minimum of five law review or law journal sources,
and/or books) that are most relevant to the paper. Including
those sources in the literature source amounts to a representation that
those sources will be cited and discussed, thoughtfully, in the final
paper. The final paper will be graded accordingly.
The outline
Due five weeks after the start of the semester, the outline should be a detailed four- to
six-page exposition of the argument of the paper, including each issue
that the author plans to address. Each section and subsection should be
clearly defined and preceded by complete topic sentences, not single word or
phrase bullet points. Each topic sentence should be set forth and supported
by subsidiary sentences. (In other words, the
outline must consist of complete sentences, not abbreviations or
shorthand.) The outline must include a thesis statement. A complete bibliography (list of all of the author’s
sources, with full citations) must be attached to the outline. It
is expected that the sources listed in the literature search will be
included in this bibliography, but also that this bibliography will be more
complete that the literature search that accompanied the short summary.
Again, it is expected that in the final paper, the
author will make substantial use of the sources listed in the bibliography, and
the final paper will be graded accordingly.
The full-dress
draft
Due nine weeks after the start of the semester, the full-dress draft amounts to a
complete version of the paper. All footnotes must be
complete. The paper must be properly proof-read and presented in
a professional format. This draft must represent the author's
absolutely best effort to that date.
The final
version
Due on the first day of the exam period, by 12 noon that
day, the final version must demonstrate that the author has made a
substantial effort to revise and perfect the full-dress draft, taking my
comments into
account. Students should anticipate that
they will be asked to make substantial revisions to the full-dress draft
of the paper, and perhaps to re-write the entire project, in response to
my comments..
All summaries,
outlines, drafts and final versions must be turned in to the Registrar,
in hard copy form, or personally handed to me. E-copies are not
acceptable except by prior arrangement with me.
No extensions
from the due dates will be granted, except in the case of family
emergency, substantial illness, or in consultation with the Associate
Dean for Academic Affairs.
Grading will follow the
following guidelines: the short summary is graded on a pass/fail
basis. The outline counts for 25% of the final grade. The
full-dress draft counts for 45% of the final grade. The final
version of the paper counts for 30% of the final grade. The final
grade may be adjusted upward or downward based on the depth of the
student's efforts to revise the full-dress draft of the paper in light of
my comments. Seminar grades may also be adjusted upward or downward
based on the quality of the student's classroom performance and paper
presentation.
Resources for Student Writers
Substantive
guidance for writers and editors of legal scholarship can be difficult
for students to find. The following is a short list of the
material that I find most helpful.
Books
| E.B. White and
William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style (4th ed. 1999).
A quick read, and be careful of its prescriptiveness, but it never goes out of style. |
| William
Zinsser, On Writing Well (30th anniversary edition, 2006). A personal favorite.
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| Richard Wydick,
Plain English for Lawyers (4th ed. 1998). A legal classic.
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| Bryan Garner,
The Elements of Legal Style (1991). In the style of Strunk and
White. |
| Bryan Garner, A
Dictionary of Modern Legal Usage (1998). For legal writers, more
useful than Black's Law Dictionary or Fowler's Modern English
Usage. [Garner's "The Winning Brief: 100 Tips for Persuasive
Briefing in Trial and Appellate Court" (1999) has been well-reviewed,
but I haven't read it, and it is very expensive.] |
| Eugene Volokh,
Academic Legal Writing (2003). |
| Elizabeth
Fajans and Mary R. Falk, Scholarly Writing for Law Students: Seminar
Papers, Law Review Notes and Law Review Competition Papers (1996). |
|
David
Mellinkoff, The Language of the Law (1963). More of intellectual
interest than of practical use, but a fascinating and still relevant
book for students of language. |
Articles and
Essays
Read good, clean
non-fiction to get a feel for styles that you would like to emulate.
My personal favorites are John McPhee (mostly natural history);
Tracy Kidder and Gary Kinder (book-length reporting, or "reportage");
Calvin Trillin (humor); Danial Boorstin, David McCullough, Jonathan
Spence, and Edmund Morgan (history); Grant Gilmore and Lawrence
Friedman (law); and Roger Penrose and Douglas Hofstadter (science).
(My fiction favorites--styles that lawyers should emulate only with expert
supervision!--include Douglas Adams, Jorge Luis Borges, and Neal
Stephenson.)
A
note on writing and presentation
(borrowed, though not verbatim, from the
author Cory Doctorow)
After writing out a
first draft, and as a first revision, try cutting out the first 10
percent of the paper. That's most likely to be the "throat
clearing" (and least useful) material. Next, move the last 30
percent of the article--the substance of your conclusion, or the
payoff--to the beginning. This works a lot of the time, though
not (perfectly) all of the time.
A note on
sources and citation
Every discipline
has its own standards regarding citation and attribution, though all
start with a common, core prohibition: Do not represent
someone else’s work as your own. Start there.
But do not stop there. Law imposes
particularly exacting requirements regarding ethical conduct in
scholarship. In legal writing, as elsewhere, avoiding plagiarism
requires including appropriate citations to all material on which a
paper relies and/or which it excerpts in any way. It also requires not
using any text authored by another, without enclosing that text in
quotation marks or otherwise distinguishing it as a block
quotation. A second rule for legal authors, and one that is more
difficult to apply in practice, is to include citations to supporting
authority for any and all statements of fact that are not "blindingly
obvious" to even a casual observer of the relevant field. If the paper
makes a statement of fact, and that fact is not "blindingly obvious,"
then that statement should be footnoted, and the footnote should
contain appropriate supporting authority.
Rules for legal
citation are, to say the least, more complex than the simple prohibition on
plagiarism. The Blue Book, A Uniform System of Citation, is accessible
here.
The Association of Legal Writing Directors has published a citation
manual that some find easier to use and more intuitive than the Blue
Book. Information about the ALWD Citation Manual is available
here. An
introduction to basic citation principles is online
here.
Teachers and
scholars of legal writing have a far more refined sense of ethical
conduct than this summary provides. The following is a short list
of resources directed at helping student writers avoid
plagiarism. Some are directed specifically towards law students;
some are not.
On
giving talks
For students (and
others) interested in learning more about how to give effective
presentations, I have only the briefest advice: Know what you
want to say (this can be trickier than it sounds); organize your talk
in advance (again, more difficult than it seems); never, ever, read
from a script (this requires mastering your material); and practice,
practice, practice!
Here are some
resources on presentations that are available on the Internet.
Note that in general they are not geared for legal audiences.
They may be, therefore, both more useful and less useful than they seem.
Last updated: August 02, 2007